Comments on: If you dare, write short-shorts http://sepiamutiny.com/blog/2005/09/30/if_you_dare_wri_1/ All that flavorful brownness in one savory packet Sat, 30 Nov 2013 11:11:28 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 By: A N N A http://sepiamutiny.com/blog/2005/09/30/if_you_dare_wri_1/comment-page-3/#comment-28388 A N N A Mon, 03 Oct 2005 05:43:44 +0000 http://sepiamutiny.com?p=2304#comment-28388 <p><a href="http://anna.typepad.com/herstory/2005/09/this_song_is_tw.html">(this week)</a></p> <p>see you...next week?</p> (this week)

see you…next week?

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By: Swami Ananda http://sepiamutiny.com/blog/2005/09/30/if_you_dare_wri_1/comment-page-3/#comment-28383 Swami Ananda Mon, 03 Oct 2005 03:23:56 +0000 http://sepiamutiny.com?p=2304#comment-28383 <p>Greetings to you. I will share this story with you and hope that it brings you one step closer to your Self.</p> <p>Swami A</p> <p>seductionsalvation.blogspot.com</p> <p>Ten patrons wait outside, hoping they will be allowed inside. They are wearing impeccable white dhotis, tied in the traditional manner; last week, a man used a belt to hold up the cloth. He was asked to leave, even though he explained that as an amputee he should be allowed some concession.</p> Greetings to you. I will share this story with you and hope that it brings you one step closer to your Self.

Swami A

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Ten patrons wait outside, hoping they will be allowed inside. They are wearing impeccable white dhotis, tied in the traditional manner; last week, a man used a belt to hold up the cloth. He was asked to leave, even though he explained that as an amputee he should be allowed some concession.

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By: Jai Singh http://sepiamutiny.com/blog/2005/09/30/if_you_dare_wri_1/comment-page-3/#comment-28305 Jai Singh Sat, 01 Oct 2005 23:00:19 +0000 http://sepiamutiny.com?p=2304#comment-28305 <p>Bong Breaker,</p> <blockquote>Jai go to the bottom of the class for getting Star Wars dialogue wrong. </blockquote> <p>I deliberately tweaked the original dialogue to make it fit my version. Go sit in the corner and write a 3000-word essay on why Jai shouldn't be at the bottom of the class.</p> Bong Breaker,

Jai go to the bottom of the class for getting Star Wars dialogue wrong.

I deliberately tweaked the original dialogue to make it fit my version. Go sit in the corner and write a 3000-word essay on why Jai shouldn’t be at the bottom of the class.

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By: Paranoid Android http://sepiamutiny.com/blog/2005/09/30/if_you_dare_wri_1/comment-page-3/#comment-28264 Paranoid Android Sat, 01 Oct 2005 18:10:33 +0000 http://sepiamutiny.com?p=2304#comment-28264 <p>All that stood between Simone and her honeymoon was a report submission.</p> <p><i>“He is never on time!”</i> she fumed, as the office clock ticked 8:45 AM. She could almost see the single-engine plane they were flying to Hawaii. She gazed at infinity in clear NY sky, to divert her mind.</p> <p><i>“Isn’t that plane flying too low?”</i></p> All that stood between Simone and her honeymoon was a report submission.

“He is never on time!” she fumed, as the office clock ticked 8:45 AM. She could almost see the single-engine plane they were flying to Hawaii. She gazed at infinity in clear NY sky, to divert her mind.

“Isn’t that plane flying too low?”

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By: Raju http://sepiamutiny.com/blog/2005/09/30/if_you_dare_wri_1/comment-page-3/#comment-28256 Raju Sat, 01 Oct 2005 14:55:00 +0000 http://sepiamutiny.com?p=2304#comment-28256 <p>He let out a sigh as he walked to the corner with the bottle of wine he'd bought and hailed a cab. He was headed to that party with the lawyer who painted he'd seen a month ago.</p> <p>He knew that guy could have broken his nose in one punch, and he shook his head</p> He let out a sigh as he walked to the corner with the bottle of wine he’d bought and hailed a cab. He was headed to that party with the lawyer who painted he’d seen a month ago.

He knew that guy could have broken his nose in one punch, and he shook his head

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By: Pablo Jones http://sepiamutiny.com/blog/2005/09/30/if_you_dare_wri_1/comment-page-3/#comment-28252 Pablo Jones Sat, 01 Oct 2005 11:00:03 +0000 http://sepiamutiny.com?p=2304#comment-28252 <p>Times New Roman or Ariel?</p> <p>She played a little more with the font, trying to decide which one was less aggressive, less cold and unforgiving. Castellar was too pretentious, Comic Sans too lively.</p> <p>She switched off the computer and wrote the leaving note by hand. At least he could remember her by something real.</p> Times New Roman or Ariel?

She played a little more with the font, trying to decide which one was less aggressive, less cold and unforgiving. Castellar was too pretentious, Comic Sans too lively.

She switched off the computer and wrote the leaving note by hand. At least he could remember her by something real.

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By: Manish Vij http://sepiamutiny.com/blog/2005/09/30/if_you_dare_wri_1/comment-page-3/#comment-28251 Manish Vij Sat, 01 Oct 2005 10:47:52 +0000 http://sepiamutiny.com?p=2304#comment-28251 <p>Kush quotes Floyd. Abhi says, <i>I am banning you right now.</i></p> <p><i><b>And he didn't even quote M.I.A. ;)</b></i></p> Kush quotes Floyd. Abhi says, I am banning you right now.

And he didn’t even quote M.I.A. ;)

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By: saurav the confounded but unready http://sepiamutiny.com/blog/2005/09/30/if_you_dare_wri_1/comment-page-3/#comment-28249 saurav the confounded but unready Sat, 01 Oct 2005 07:59:10 +0000 http://sepiamutiny.com?p=2304#comment-28249 <p><b>Everything Comes In Threes at about 2 a.m.</b></p> <p>Are the words of the sufis worth anything? "Nay!" I say. There is nothing in the world worth anything except a good Beatle's lyric and a fresh cup of coffee in the morning.</p> <p>And I don't drink coffee.</p> Everything Comes In Threes at about 2 a.m.

Are the words of the sufis worth anything? “Nay!” I say. There is nothing in the world worth anything except a good Beatle’s lyric and a fresh cup of coffee in the morning.

And I don’t drink coffee.

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By: saurav the self-pitying fantasist http://sepiamutiny.com/blog/2005/09/30/if_you_dare_wri_1/comment-page-3/#comment-28248 saurav the self-pitying fantasist Sat, 01 Oct 2005 07:48:37 +0000 http://sepiamutiny.com?p=2304#comment-28248 <p><b>Life's Too Far From Brooklyn</b></p> <p>Chicago! Land of glorious lights, of elevated trains, of Sandburg's poems and Sandberg's double plays, of daytime games and shirtless fans, and circular myths that may never go away--Chicago!</p> <p>Chicago, if only you weren't so far away-- if you were on the C, I might come Saturday.</p> Life’s Too Far From Brooklyn

Chicago! Land of glorious lights, of elevated trains, of Sandburg’s poems and Sandberg’s double plays, of daytime games and shirtless fans, and circular myths that may never go away–Chicago!

Chicago, if only you weren’t so far away– if you were on the C, I might come Saturday.

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By: saurav the solipsist http://sepiamutiny.com/blog/2005/09/30/if_you_dare_wri_1/comment-page-3/#comment-28247 saurav the solipsist Sat, 01 Oct 2005 07:33:55 +0000 http://sepiamutiny.com?p=2304#comment-28247 <p><b>A writer's resignation</b></p> <p>Fingers move deftly across the dirtied pavement of the keyboard, cli-cli-cli-cli-clicking ad nauseum, until at last they pause.</p> <p>The inner voice urges them onwards, without mind, though there had never been anything left to say in the first place.</p> <p>When will I say "amen"?</p> A writer’s resignation

Fingers move deftly across the dirtied pavement of the keyboard, cli-cli-cli-cli-clicking ad nauseum, until at last they pause.

The inner voice urges them onwards, without mind, though there had never been anything left to say in the first place.

When will I say “amen”?

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